Too cliched, or not too cliched? That is the question.

So... do you think it's too cliched for two people to confess their love for one another and have sex the same night in a fic? Even if they've been giving each other the runaround for almost 2 years (one of those years in which they were too scared to admit their feelings based on past heartbreak/fear of being a substitute for another)?

I'm asking because I have written and rewritten Chapter 12 of my fic, and I'm not feeling it. I'm not feeling the "I love you, same here, let's do it", nor am I feeling the "I love you, I love you too the end" aspect. *sigh*

*Screams and Cusses in every language I know*

Banned Durex Condom Commercial:

( Cut because Youtube shows the worst moment in the preview )

Nevermind me, I'll be over here making arrangements to fall in the closest open grave...