Revisions: 1 Up

Finally got around to revising 1 Up. I did not change the plot, though, just some minor details and discrepancies.

Changes made:

• Sir to Lord


• Conrad to Conrart, unless Yuuri himself is addressing and/or thinking about him.


• Epithets (the blond, the fire mazoku, the other man, the taller man, the double black, etc.)- Got rid of most of them, because I stopped using them about half a year ago. I think the writing is "smoother" without them.


• Various grammatical errors I overlooked before.

Suitors Chapter 6 will be up within the next 24 hours!

ETA: Forgot to mention that I also edited out a lot of italics in 1 Up. Oh, and, Suitors is up now.

Suitors - Chapter 06: The Longest Night Part II

Title: Suitors - (Chapter 06: The Longest Night Part II)
Author: batty_gal a.k.a Tetra26
Rating: T
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Pairing: Wolfram x ???
Word Count: 5523
Fic Type: Ongoing
Fic Summary: After Wolfram ended his engagement in a fit of rage, suitors from all around started to flock to the castle to seek his hand – much to Gwendal's dismay. Who will capture his heart? A random noble? Murata? Yozak? And, what about Yuuri? Sequel to 1 Up.

Chapter Summary: Part two of what seems to be the longest night ever continues as Yozak lies. Beautifully. Several POV changes in this chapter.

Previous Chapters: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5

Prequel: 1 Up: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9

( We're only as believable as couple as how we act together as one. )